'i will still smile
for i shared with you a moments breath'
you couldn't have said it any better...
this poem is so sad and so beautifully written, it haunts me
Well well well, look who has more in common than he thought. I just wrote a poem called 'In Your Eyes' around the same topic, approx.
I don't know what inspired your poem but mine was inspired by an 18yr old girl suffering from cancer.