A womb's virtue is a powerful message of the relation between ourselves and that is beyond, above and surrounds us. I like the use of imagery that keeps the tension between being afloat in the womb and emerging a whole person. Well Done!
I like it. There is a lot of warm feeling and the similies gives you the sense of longing that you want to deliver. Certainly rain does remind us of those special instances we shared with the ones we love.