How interesting. And how true. Try my poems: Poem, and Why Poems should be read aloud. Then let's talk.
This was a perfect small poem with an open end to tempt the imagination into further speculations. Quite entertaining. Try my new one: 'Why poems should be read aloud, ' or any other one of mine that strikes your fancy.
Very funny and visual. I liked it. Perhaps you will try some of my haiku?