i really liked this piece waaay too much, and oh how wise from you to descripe theone man's soul dessolving in acid, i assume that fits bec, liquids were never been able to be caught in one's hand (as a concrete material) , and simply that's how the soul is... you never catch, but yet it dessolves......
thank you very much for that piece,
give us more,
that's great Xoubiya, i liked the way she wonders... but it's the eternal conquest of how's Eve's body is a dilemma... read my seventh quatrain of my Eve's and u r gonna like it ;)
bye sunshine :)