I give this a definite 10. When you read it you can not only hear the strength but feel it to. And that my friend is an art form you seem to have perfected.
Wow! I love the way you wrote this. The emotion and visuals behind it are amazingly accurate. I give this a definite 10+
Wow you did an amazing job with this. Your descriptions were almost lively when combined with the emotions you put in with it. keep up the good work i give it a 10+.