I feel it is the most personal poem from all your ones which I could read here... Full of sorrow and maturity. Full of you.
It's my favourite poem of yours. It's hard to me to express what I feel after reading it because of the language barrier but you can be sure, I will read it many times yet. It's so full of emotions and so real! Also, the finish is surprising...
It's really good! I like the most the first stanza. Stephen, I agree that you're very talented! Don't waste it! ! !