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S. A. S. eastern standard time / United States, Female, 63
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  • (8/17/2013 12:39:00 AM)

    without working the line breaks, another possible edit: Her lips too lovely to wither. They impacted a part of us, hard to define or worshp. Too good to be dwelling upon, the apples of love stay on the table. They offer themselves- tasty women addicted to stares of night and consequence.
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    I don't like the title Madame. It seems like a; poem that could have a larger meaning, and that limits it.

  • POEM: Three Days Of Rain by Lamont Palmer (8/17/2013 12:27:00 AM)

    This makes me think of the Don Hall quote about self-editing, cutting back. Example: My own clouds form: Roofs are/ slanted opinions/ the right amount of strength. it's gray and hopefully peaceful

  • POEM: Trayvon by Holly Jamestone (7/29/2013 10:42:00 PM)

    I agree with you that this was an injustice.

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