Ok. Yeeeeaaaah. Mmhm. Thats an interesting line. Didn't know ya had it in ya Tai. :)
(2/16/2006 3:19:00 PM)
'She looks so round, sexy,
Like a real woman should.'
Is the adj 'round' on purpose? Many real women may be round, which men find sexy. But I'm just wondering if that is what you intented? Perhaps curvy?
(2/16/2006 12:44:00 PM)
I like this one. Well done. Its flow was consistent. I do believe that kind of pain is worth avoiding at all cost. Although the human spirit is resilient enough to dodge, our decision to accept it isn't.