I cannot really feel this poem. I'm not sure why. If you'd care to explain it I'd appreciate it.
It doesn't really click with me.
Anyway; it's well versed and ignore the comment below me. All that needed to be said was 'please don't email me for comments'.
Anyway take care and you can return my favor of commenting, by reading and commenting on some of my poems. Take care, and enjoy ^^ Peace and Love.