I think this is my favorite piece of everything I've read thus far today. It really is amazing...and you say these are songs? Most definitely something I'd consider listening to, if the music is as amazing as the lyrics. You have a way with words most would consider enviable, Mark. Continue with your writing, because it is pivotal that good writing breaks through the monotony of the same-ol, same-ol that I see all the time. Again, good work.
(10/16/2007 5:56:00 PM)
I love it. The repetition is addictive and the wordplay is wonderfully clever. It's definitely something I would consider a good piece. Good work.