Great poem. Loved it. Keep writing. I rate it at 10.
(2/13/2006 6:11:00 AM)
I loved this poem. You have such a wonderful gift of describing things; I can visualize the scene. Know something? There is a universal touch about this poem! It applies to all parks, all lakes, all walks around the lake [or reservoir as you put it]. I dont have to go to California; the images you convey through your skillful words speak of morning walkers and joggers all over the world! Love your wry humour. This poem can be read again and again, and found refreshing all the time.