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  • POEM: Fireflies In July by Pamela Sinicrope (9/22/2015 11:56:00 AM)

    I can feel the heartbreak in your poem. He must have been truly a beloved brother. At what age did he die? How long since he has been gone? Memories of my brother float in the air. July can be a cruel month; among all the fireworks, remembering your lost brother!

  • POEM: A Sudden Downpour by Valsa George (9/18/2015 1:58:00 AM)

    Thanks. I enjoyed the sudden tropical downpour that heralds the start of the monsoons in South Asia.

    Suggestion: It should be 'making puddles' (plural) .
    Instead of 'weight laden', try 'heavy'.

    Everybody loves the rain, especially after a long and terrible drought!


  • POEM: Reminiscences And Regrets by Tan Pratonix (9/16/2015 8:49:00 PM)

    There is another part of the world that you might not be familiar with: Tropical South Asia, the land of mangoes. So spice does come into it!

    The words correspond to the real things. Those are different varieties of mangoes.

    Thanks for your comments, Nathan. I am encouraged.

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