Omg... I love it. Like really. Its amazing.: ] 'The pain of affection/Is too much to handle' That line is incredible. Really... Good job man!
I like it. The cuplets work grate. Its really really good. I like the part about the scars on your heart. Thats so relatable. Good Job.: ]
I love it. I really really do. I expecially like the The soothing pains of vampires and thrust/Devouring emotions of sleepers and lust. I love the immagry that you bring. Stop saying your stuff is BS.