I like it. It made me feel uncomfortable, as I imagine people that have been literally stuck under rubble must have felt. It also made me think of feeling stuck emotionally. I enjoy poems that evoke imagery and feelings. Thank you.
from wut i can c ur poems r pretty deep...seems like u got alot goin' on in there (ur mind) ...anyway i thought this poem was interesting...and though i'm not real sure wut exactly ur question is...it looks like wut ur in need of is real hope... no more lies, no more empty promises, no more deceptions/disillusions... http: //www.watchtower.org/library/g/2004/4/22/article_04.htm...if ur up to it... go to this link and actually take time to read it. i think u might find it beneficial... if u have any questions about it...hit me up!