If only it were that easy.....
This is a beautiful piece, it's a 10/10 and going on my favorites
This poem has excellent imagery, but it could be tightened up in some parts. Not bad, but you're capable of much more. Push the boundaries, call her a dumbB: D
Some hearts are not made of gold
Some hearts are stories of massacres untold
Somethings lost are meant to be gained
Somethings in this world my angel are hard to be explained
Kyle, this is a beautiful stanza.