I am humbled by your obvious abilities. I Am A Soldier is simply wonderful. My husband is in the Navy and I must tell you, you have moved me. Thank YOU!
(5/24/2006 9:39:00 PM)
I think you've done very well with it, Joseph! I understand about being your own worst critic for I am the same. I've only just recently started writing again and I'm a lot less confident about my pieces than I was 10 years ago. It's taking me some time to get back into it. I feel certain I'll improve with time. I did really enjoy this one, though. If there were anything that I would ask you to consider changing at all, it would be the ending. It just felt too abrupt to me. I saw a couple of your others that looked interesting so off I go! Keep it up! Sandy