...well... when you first read this to me i felt the artisticness flowing from your voice, but when i read it myself i felt the love flowing through each word. you are such a great poet. i look up to your work, although i must say i will never be able to match it. this is a wonderful piece. please keep them coming!
i know now just how much every word means. its poems like this this that truly shout out just how fantastic you are. i could never write a poem that rhymed and had meaning, you are one of the best. make sure she reads this several times throughout her life, and everytime she does im sure she will gather something more from it.