Fair play for getting the word 'Machiavellianism' into meter and rhyme.
(11/15/2006 3:46:00 PM)
Wow. The story and character. I'm officially a fan. Your too good for my comments.
(11/15/2006 3:39:00 PM)
Makes me want to shout profanities its so beautiful. In my humble opinion it shows poetic confidence and maturity. To coin the phrase Atlantic eyes says to me a confident assurance in the way you use words. The last to lines, phew, loved 'em. Leaves you feeling blown away.
Very liberal praise but i reckon its justified here.