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Erasmo . Mexico City / Micronesia, Federated States of, Male, 25
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  • POEM: I Know by Jenna Blair (2/19/2008 2:34:00 PM)

    It could be a good poem if it wasn't for those spelling mistakes here and there. You have some smooth rhymes but a rather awkward rhytm, still, nice work Jenna, or should I address you as Ms. Blair?


  • POEM: I Know by Jenna Blair (5/11/2007 10:29:00 PM)

    'When everything becomes too ordinary, too normal, we need a sanctuary to refuge ourselves in.' At least that's what I understood from reading this. Then again, as you once told me: this is 'a little too much like a story that is not a poem'.
    Just one thing troubles me: what exactly is this 'pattern' that you mention?
    -C e r a s R a y n -

  • POEM: When I Die... by Joshua Fegley (4/19/2007 8:50:00 AM)

    When I die I'd like to live your poem Joshua, achieve peace and freedom that life could not provide

    - C e r a s R a y n -

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