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Shane Markie Denver / United States, Male, 52
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  • POEM: Prolonged....... by Shivapriya Surve (12/20/2006 2:45:00 PM)

    Hi Priya,

    Your use of aliteration is outstanding here. I agree also with Preets (Preeti Datar) in every way on this one. As poets, you or I may be more acutely aware of our own mortality or physical difficulties or hinderances more often than others, because as we write, we create, therefore, death as an inevitable occurance in the Universe is thus prolonged yet further. It is stopped for a few moments, therefore, there's less suffering in the world in this way.

    Shane

  • POEM: On A Resolute Land.... by Shivapriya Surve (12/20/2006 2:32:00 PM)

    Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES, YES, YES!

    Often the ones who are silent have the most to say.

    Often those who are weakest and the most insignificant accomplish the most good.

    May you always do the same Priya, in your poems and elsewhere.

    Shane

  • POEM: Metamorphosis by Shivapriya Surve (12/20/2006 2:24:00 PM)

    This poem you have given us is way cool, Priya! I like how you use somewhat difficult and descrptive vocabulary in describing your heart as a wounded bird. I hope you continue 'sprouting wings' in your poems most often.

    Shane

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