Great job! See? You know more than you think you do! Find that inner peace girl! You deserve it. ~ Laura
Not quite. Your stanzas are: 7 - 8 - 4. Should be 5 -7-5. Keep trying, good message though...
quid pro quo dear poetress friend. what qualities lie within the skin? aren't they already formed? how does your skin define your mind? ? isn't your mind what defines your skin? ?