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Frank Simon Colwich, Kansas / United States, Male, 53
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  • POEM: Sound Of The Wind by Venus Fire (2/27/2009 11:07:00 PM)

    Good job Venus Fire!
    The first stanza is good, but has more lines which don't rhyme. I feel you could do better with that part. But overall a good write!
    This is just my advice or opinion, see what others think before changing.
    I have a similar poem called From the Four Winds. Check out if time permits- mostly about directions not the source. So I like what you've done with this one.
    Frank

  • POEM: Sound Of The Wind by Venus Fire (2/27/2009 4:55:00 PM)

    Sally,
    Nice job with this one as well. Indeed, every cloud has a silver lining. Well written, I love the flow of this one.

  • POEM: Sound Of The Wind by Venus Fire (2/27/2009 4:48:00 PM)

    Oh Sally,
    I love the imagery in the beginning and body of this poem! But mostly the humble way you describe the sun, well- beating us back to dirt!
    Marvelous Sally! Must check out more later.
    Frank

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