Like Greenwolfe, I also have difficulty reading Looooooooong poems, but your words kept
me reading. You may only be 15, but you have an inner depth that most people will never have. It is very difficult to put emotions and inner feelings into words, but you are able to do that. My fave words are: I thank her (for) each breath I breathe. I also gave it a 10. After reading the poem I loved title. Becoming Me.
Your other poem is just as strongly worded, with a very strong, heartfelt message.
Hi Melvina and good morning to you. I loved your poem 'Sweet Sweet Jesus. I esp loved 'I’m covered by his blood'. So very true. I only wish I had more time to read more of your poems and the other poets poems. Just not enough hours in the day. TJ