excellently expanding the boundaries of what is and what is not poetry. reminiscent of john cage's ' 4'33 '.
kudo's. i did not know of this poem. it must become famous ion the annals of poetry. very beat.
Flavia, you really have a lot of talent and a unique poetic vision. Keep writing!
I like this very much. No rhyme scheme. Vivid imagery. And it evokes a world beyond the ordinary.