I disagree. You get out of bed and to out into the world and figure out the solution. I do like the simple three line poem though.
(4/12/2007 2:03:00 PM)
I've just read six or seven of your poems. This one, and Thumbnail Impression, are my two favorites. The line, 'and the grass/Clung to the ground lower than usual....' I think is great. It really brings the poem into focus.
(4/12/2007 1:57:00 PM)
Yes, in my dorm room my freshman year of college I swigged back a can of beer that my roommate had been using as an ashtray. He got a good laugh out of it.