Perfect little poem, says a lot with so few words... and covers a feeling we have all had at one time.
Also it rhymes which means it's a proper poem 8)
Keep doing what you're doing.
(8/8/2009 4:17:00 PM)
you truely have a great talent, way beyond your years
can create words and lines that provoke both smiles and tears
i'm sure your poems will cause all the reactions you desired
and they all rhyme! a feat that must always be admired
a skill that puts most grown up 'poets' on here to shame
i have no doubt we all will hear a lot more of your name
keep on doing what you're doing 8)
(9/8/2008 10:04:00 AM)
Nicely done, great short lines with no wasted energy... keep doing what you do 8)