my mom smokes and so does my grandma. this poem definatly sends a message out to those who smoke. they are trying to quit and i am so proud of them. love this poem too. you so so much in just a little amount of words, and you also speak your mind and tell us (ur readers) what is really going on.
Hey this is Kayla! Thanks SO MUCH for the comment on my random weird poem! lol i am glad that is my first comment. your poems are amazing! ! ! my poems are just about me. yours are about what really matters. Or if there is a problem in your or someone else's life you'll qoute them in the poem. I love poems and hope to be able to write them like you! : D