wow! that's amazing! it is one of those rare poems that speak to the soul, and manages to get it to listen. that's why you need to know: my soul listened. It listened, it understood and it felt. it felt emotions it hadn't felt often when reading a poem. Congratulations and thank you for sharing, xx 10+
this poem is wonderfully written. The way you make responsibility a person to adress, instead of just a consept. I understand you in this poem, at least I think I do. It's one of my favorites. thank you for scharing
I do wonder where this poem came from. It sounds very genuine, I'm impressed.
good luck with your responsible life and I hope to read more of you