This is a lovely poem,
It shows such emotions that many families live through. I know alot of these feelings as they were once mine. Luckily I have made my amends. Hopefully you can to.
It is a lovely poem about true love. To want to be with somebody for that long is amazing. It is a beautiful use of imagery.
This is a really nice poem Tim that is filled with beauty. You can really go and compute with it, I know that I know exactly what you would have been.
Just a side comment...
Are you saying your not a poet? Because that poem wasn't 1000 words let alone lines.