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Kelvin Karani Lamu / Kenya, Male, 28
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  • POEM: Kofi Annan The Sage by Phanice Wamukota (6/23/2015 11:56:00 AM)

    We all acknowledge Annan and his team of eminent persons for showing us where the rain started beating us. You may want cut out some words though. I think this ode would be so much memorable if you would aim at being economical with your words.

    Otherwise, its a great read.

  • POEM: The Thank You Note by Phanice Wamukota (6/23/2015 11:50:00 AM)

    The idea is refreshingly great. Am assuming that the persona is addressing a god-mother of sorts, an elderly woman, married even, who has, and still is, doing great things that inspire them. I think it is possible to cut out some some words to concretize the idea and make the poem even better.

    Good luck!

  • POEM: Windows by Naseer Ahmed Nasir (11/23/2013 12:58:00 AM)

    This is a wonderful poem.... I think I'll have to re-read it though to fully appreciate the message.

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