i like the way your poem looks the reader in the eye and challenges her. Your words are so powerful its not a 'plea' anymore... the questioning quality of your poem leaves the reader fumbling, almost.
nice... very nice...
loved the romance of the poem... and the poignancy with which it ends. i could feel spring around me
nice! i really enjoyed this one. the simplicity is endearing. liked the usage of 'god surged'. that is such a perfect way to describe a moment, a conversation, everyday beauty. thanks.