That's so emotional and deep! ! I can see where you are going here!
I loved the way you repeated: 'the weeds bribed the foolish gardener' That was nice! But you know...I loved when you used simpler vocabulairy and rhymed everything! That used to be nice aswell- - the way you played with words so simply and nicely! It felt like there was life in your poems!
But this style is nice too...Maybe because I don't use this style of poetry I wasn't so impressed like I was with your other poems! ! But this is also beautiful! Good job!