At each stage, they are asking for verification code...really disturbing.
rajkumar your poem..presented in style with rich vocabularies.The philosophy laced in your poem is thought-provoking.Thank you for remembering me.BTW, I've not written in Poemhunter for more than a year.Just saw lot of changes in rules.Can youtell me in brief about te changes so that I can again start visiting and writing
Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem.I find that you are too busy with your school and of course, writing poems.
I have chosen one of your recent poems and find that you have potential.
May I take the liberty of re-writing your poem without deviating from your ideas.? This is just a suggestion You may take it or toss it.
The rain, thunder and lightning
are such gifts of God overwhelming
divine show of fireworks,
sound of the air rejoining;
Rain sprinkles on the ground,
symbol of grace and cleaning;
Never know why am I scaring.
Hope it helps. Rated at 7
Thanks for your invite to comment on your poems.
Well, the topic chosen by you is nice but the presentation has to be sharpened.
The submission should never be directed as a speech.What you want to convey should be presented in a capsule of metaphor or imagery where the reader easily can relate to.
Less said is always better.I feel you should change two words 'inattention'and repetition of 'only just brushing' and 'hastily' should be replaced by 'hasty'.You can refer to any Thesaurus for replacement.
Don't take it as discouraging.I feel, you have possibility and this is to help only.
Liked the topic rated at 8