I really liked this poem. Poor little blades of grass. I can just picture the small baldes of grass screaming. Good job!
Wow, if that doesn't paint a mental picture I don't know what does. I like the 'Pushing the sticky liquid through its viens'. A nice poem about a heart.
Rylan you are a very gifted writer, keep up the good work and you will go far. I like this poem. It is really meaningful plus it rhymes. That is pretty hard to do. Nice work.