your expressions are so powerful that they can make a person cry.i can connect to it very well and the beauty is the way you putted it down.
the emotions are very beautifully woven into words.there are some pain which cant be ever be settled but then there are some memories which can take away the gloominess from this pain
simply amazing! ! ! i loved the way you used the basic needs to express and bring the effect in ur poem....very powerful! keep up d good work! !