(Have you ever wondered?
Why the Sun sets, from the east?
It’s the sign, where I leave my heart)
Wow what a touch on these lines lovely.... i like them
showing love tranmitting it by using nature. beautiful.... i enjoy it from the start till the end...10/5
Well Describe... u really make the reader feel ur poem...... gd job..
a good piece. u do describe nature beautifully.10/5