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Timothy Venard lewes / United Kingdom, Male, 20
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  • POEM: This was just as hard to write... by Kaitlin Christine (5/23/2010 11:26:00 AM)

    one thing i like about this poem is the fact that it has little struckture, u geta sense of someone loosing contorole. and at the end, 'i am back in reality, i am ok.' works brilliantlyy, because its as if everything is back in order. its brilliant!

  • POEM: Him by Kaitlin Christine (5/23/2010 11:22:00 AM)

    good use iof metephor, i like this poem, it's relatebale.

  • POEM: Control by Kaitlin Christine (5/23/2010 11:20:00 AM)

    a nice poem. welll, not nice, quite dark, and relay rather depressing. an exelent read. you have a knack for expressing emotion most poets would give their eyes for

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