one thing i like about this poem is the fact that it has little struckture, u geta sense of someone loosing contorole. and at the end, 'i am back in reality, i am ok.' works brilliantlyy, because its as if everything is back in order. its brilliant!
good use iof metephor, i like this poem, it's relatebale.
a nice poem. welll, not nice, quite dark, and relay rather depressing. an exelent read. you have a knack for expressing emotion most poets would give their eyes for