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Nathaniel Flying Owl
Nathaniel Flying Owl Milwaukie, OR / United States, Male, 27
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  • (1/13/2014 6:22:00 PM)

    I think Her life was one lived based solely on greed would work better if it read A life lived solely on greed. Otherwise, a good poem.

  • (1/8/2014 5:22:00 PM)

    This is a good poem. My only suggestion is to use a synonym for killing (it felt a little clunky to me) .

  • POEM: (There's a fire burning in my eyes) by Allen Steble (5/16/2013 12:06:00 PM)

    The repetition is very complimentaryand using conversational speech is a nice touch. I would give it a six or a seven.

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