'The philosophical concept is to be on right direction.' Who knows what is the right direction? I liked the philosophical thoughts of the poet.
'Divergence my property
Superb. Going against the swim. Human life is tied with karma. Can there be any freedom from it?
I liked the poem. It is enjoyable to read. I especially loved these two lines:
'moon yet knows the curve of meaning blue
twilight when hanging in the shadow of love'