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Luis Estable Oriente / Cuba, Male, 57
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  • POEM: Go Now, Unto Your Silent Sleep... (Rep.) by Frank James Ryan Jr...FjR (8/2/2015 4:54:00 AM)

    The reason of the going and why the going is not explained here, but the poem has a good sadness. I say a good sadness for this ends in comfort.

    I think you did well here. The lines are well-defined and the words have not a bad choice. Considering all things, you have written a good poem to my humble estimation.

    keep it up and good luck to you in your future writing.

    Luis Estable

  • POEM: Love Is Greatest Ever! by Ramesh T A (8/2/2015 4:47:00 AM)

    For some reason, there is a something here that does not go as smoothly as one thinks. The thought is said a bit forced and the message is a bit of a cliche.

    One thing I agree here; love as more powerful than any other kind of power; : the power of wealth, the power of power, the power of force and so on. You just did no make this, in the poem, as good as it could have been.
    But keep trying! You poses inspiration and will.

    Good day!

    Luis Estable

  • POEM: Enduring by RoseAnn V. Shawiak (8/2/2015 4:39:00 AM)

    This is good, but I have a little issue here. The lines are too much run-on which makes this good try have no clear break and read like prose.

    When writing poetry, t do not just link one line to another to another. Try to make some division even if you are writing in free style. Remember that poetry is never prose. Make that clear when you write a poem, but you did good here poetically. There is passion in your trying.

    Good day!

    Luis Estable

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