Wow, simply beautiful, absolutely amazing. You are a wonderful poet and this poem definitely expressed that.
burning my eyes
spilling over, pouring like rain.
broken shards of my heart falling
next to your grave they remain.
My favorite lines right here, the poem ended absolutely amazingly, this is definitely a 10, no wait, I'll give you a 20! ! =D Wow, beautiful poem, keep on writing, you see, they only get better and better and better! ! =D
Very amazing poem, it sounds so similar to mine in emotion and writing style, but i give you 10++ props for this, absolutely amazing. Thingsin life do want to make you change..but sometimes it's too late, congrats, wonderful poem! !