Members Profile

Bri Edwards
Bri Edwards Eureka / United States, 68
Profession :
retired usps clerk
Education :
quit college

About Me : added Sept. 23, 2015: I AM A JOKESTER, BUT IM OFTEN SERIOUS AS WELL. if you have doubts about whether my writing is serious OR not, please ask. Even some ... more »

This list shows most recent 10 activities.
Activities Date
Poems read  
10/21/2016 3:41:00 PM
10/21/2016 3:29:00 PM
10/21/2016 2:54:00 PM
10/21/2016 2:41:00 PM
10/20/2016 5:57:00 PM
10/20/2016 5:52:00 PM
10/20/2016 2:34:00 PM
10/20/2016 2:31:00 PM
10/20/2016 2:19:00 PM
10/20/2016 2:14:00 PM
Poems Rated  
10/11/2016 10:57:00 AM
6/20/2016 11:43:00 PM
6/6/2016 1:13:00 PM
3/18/2016 2:33:00 PM
3/9/2016 9:15:00 PM
3/5/2016 11:58:00 AM
2/27/2016 12:34:00 PM
2/27/2016 12:18:00 PM
2/27/2016 12:13:00 PM
2/27/2016 12:10:00 PM
Poems Liked  
2/3/2015 10:58:02 PM
12/6/2014 4:13:43 PM
11/28/2014 4:55:25 PM

Bri Edwards's last comments on poems and poets

  • POEM: Take A Break by Tapan M. Saren (10/20/2016 5:57:00 PM)

    looks like anyone who comments becomes a PH Friend! or most.

    this shall sail into MyPoemList!

    i would comment more, but i see NO typos, AND it is time for me to take a break.

    bri :)

    i believe a welcome to PH is in order. WELCOME! oh, now i see you have been here most of this year. :)

  • POEM: Blankety Blank Frank by Andy Brookes (10/20/2016 2:34:00 PM)

    ooops! not Section B. but i think i SHALL start a Section C for October and put your poem there. i have quite a few waiting to get in before November rolls much closer.

    bri :)

  • POEM: Blankety Blank Frank by Andy Brookes (10/20/2016 2:31:00 PM)

    well, here it is! still with 'the typos' however. but so well done otherwise. let's see if anyone else sees the 'typos'. i'm almost tempted to put them back into the version now in Section B of October's 'showcase'.

    this is a great write.

    rhyme it seems is my only bow........luckily (for me) you rhymed this with flow so i then knew you didn't mean
    ...........................................................bow as in take a bow or bow wow (dog speak) . :)
    .........yes, your rhymes may act as a launching device to catapult your poem into existence, as it often happens to me as well.
    - - - - - - - -
    from Google:

    Treacle - Wikipedia
    https: //
    Treacle is any uncrystallised syrup made during the refining of sugar. The most common forms of treacle are golden syrup, a pale variety, and a darker variety known as black treacle. Black treacle, or molasses, has a distinctively strong, slightly bitter flavour, and a richer colour than golden syrup.
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    nice use of a funny-sounded (to me) word.

    some favorite lines:

    a breath of fresh air will sort me out
    inspiration, I'm sure will gush and sprout.


    So the days started poorly I'll go back to bed
    try to reboot the Muse in my head

    Andy, i see here no mention of Bad Verse in the style of William McGonagal. as you wrote in the note to me. i'll add it as a Poet's Note after your poem where i use it in Section B of October's 'showcase' on my site.
    i'm sure you don't mind.

    bri :)

    and to MyPoemList!

Read all 4296 comments »
[Hata Bildir]