Okay I absolutely love this one. I mean the first two lines alone are fabulous. They create a somber and bittersweet feel, with a tinge of truth. You kept a theme throughout. One of ease, that would be therapeutic to someone in need of reassurance. And I really love the use of a thousand tomorrows and how it ended with something endless
I love this poem! I love your use of illustration, the words you used Washing, scrubbing, rinsing, patting really make it seemed like you were something so easily used, not properly cared for and discarded. And the fact that you were ridding yourself of maltreatment is always a plus in my book. And a powerful conclusion. Great Job!