here, the adam and eve must have more of a serine atmosphere and significance added, it seems. true they arey young, but good that the grew old.. we are destined to perch on the branch of this gigantic time-tree!
Alas! it happened again, then! just a stock expression from a feminine vocal caused one to ebb off on the tides of afflictions... i am sad. cute lil poem. simple words and expressions, sharp to the point of pain. good.