This truly is a magnificent poem, capturing the darker aspect of the abandoned society. It reminds me of a poem I wrote years ago called The Face of Indifference, which I would be happy to message you as I do not have it posted. And as always I find your work elegant and captivating, a very rich tapestry of description and culture. Foreign from my own yet the element of despair and abandonment pierces though all cultures. Thank you for your poem.