it is quite dark. But you are talking about something real, real monster, while the first part of your poem suggests you are fighting with your own darkness. I dont like real monsters, prefer to deal with my own darkness. Good luck!
It is very beautiful and very honest. I love it. Also quite sad. Sometimes we all have this block where words just dont match. All is left then is just pure love) Good luck with your writings!
I like it) interesting juxtaposition