Wow this guy sounds like a tough guy to be with. It reminds me of all the donald Trump jokes I've ever heard. YOUR FIRED! :) great poem I like the rhythm, its almost like a rap in a way. excellent work!
Where do you live to write about such tragic events? Is this poem indeed historically significant?
Is this poem about the last few flickers of life, and the desperate last minute bid to hold on as your flame flickers low and the maws of darkness close in?