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Lare Austin El Segundo / United States, Male, 67
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  • POEM: Watching From Afar by James Lee Watts (1/21/2006 12:19:00 PM)

    Hi James...I believe you are now becoming a very fine poet. My gosh...this is a wonderful write...you display emotions and wonderment and feelings that are right on the target. I like how you build the entire piece carefully into a crescendoing climax that has a most perfect ending. Perhaps just one correction...on just this one line...

    'How did this silent dove make feel like this? ' You may want to inser the word 'me' between make and feel...other than that...this is very well done...very well done...

    Lare

  • POEM: Watching From Afar by James Lee Watts (4/9/2005 11:19:00 AM)

    Hi Ulrike...this is so wonderfully laced with mood, feeling and imagery. May I use the word 'terrific'? I love your style of writing...you have a gifted way of capturing all the things that make a reader 'feel' what you say...simply put...very well done...

    Lare

  • POEM: Fatuous Angel! by Lynette Dias Gouveia (4/9/2005 11:16:00 AM)

    Hi Lynette...wow...this is very well done...very powerful...I felt very much the frustration you have proclaimed here...you have a very precise and neat style in this poem...very well done...

    Lare

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