Another strong poem
Liked the compressed feel in language use and structure
compliments the poems theme perfectly.
Many good submissions today (Miss America!)
Just home for lunch comment more later
And yes, i read your poem this morning and it made me think
of my own
Thought I'd share :)
(11/8/2004 4:08:00 PM)
The poem is simple, plain and elegant,
like the 'white rose' itself.
(11/8/2004 4:06:00 PM)
Hilarious. Very Honest.
Very good sense of movemnt and rhythm and excellent
sense of playfulness
And yes, it's another eason I'm glad I'm a man :)