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  • POEM: Daddy by Sonja Broderick (2/19/2009 7:08:00 PM)

    Kevin Broderick RIP 23rd January 2009

  • POEM: Daddy by Sonja Broderick (6/20/2008 4:44:00 PM)

    A powerful experience. May I suggest that you begin with: 'The marks are still there' and go from there?

  • POEM: Daddy by Sonja Broderick (6/20/2008 4:41:00 PM)

    Amber, your poetry needs work to sharpen it, but you have touched on something that is close to my heart. I find myself engaged in conversation with work colleagues about celebrity - for a moment - before I assert that I don't bloody care about their lives. I don't CARE about what they do. We should not bother about their lives, what is happening in our own is much richer and I hope that is what you wanted to convey by irony. I've tried to write about this before but don't bother. give your time over to the beauty of your children, the strength of your relationship and character and the wonder of your experience. That is much more valuable material than the celebrity culture we find ourselves victim to.

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