merely by reading the first line, I fell in love with the whole.
the end really does this justice, pulls it tightly and makes it a very worthy piece.
I like this. It actually reminds me of a proverb I read from the bible, when I was a kid - about settling a debt/score sooner rather than later (before it ends up in court) .
This is a nice piece - the very nature rhymes and length of each sentence really help it to flow.